tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22668381.post3837290858884840540..comments2010-01-25T17:05:39.535-05:00CreativeShockerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17463001785010656403noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22668381.post-83493358824143418852010-01-25T17:05:39.535-05:002010-01-25T17:05:39.535-05:00Hey! I think its time I read your archives:) This one&#39;s got me stoked. I like the ending.Manjuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09162638913726473926noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22668381.post-10683221082840055802010-01-25T14:32:38.146-05:002010-01-25T14:32:38.146-05:00real outcastnastyness comes when you use a single f word, from the same people.<br />flowers always comes with conditions..<br />bricks are much better..Vamseehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04494101399235712252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22668381.post-47487304324190176592010-01-25T14:19:23.505-05:002010-01-25T14:19:23.505-05:00@ srujan &#39;original creativity&#39; .. lol :PCreativeShockerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17463001785010656403noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22668381.post-14497510034380597502010-01-25T13:58:30.455-05:002010-01-25T13:58:30.455-05:00Is the Creative Shocker back to his original creativity? I liked this one..Srujanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10563703040149414354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22668381.post-84492130723055191582010-01-25T03:12:11.356-05:002010-01-25T03:12:11.356-05:00*introdarthvaderhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11748362303787968240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22668381.post-84761603245635201232010-01-25T03:11:53.460-05:002010-01-25T03:11:53.460-05:00would make a good into to a movie...:)darthvaderhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11748362303787968240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22668381.post-22162175683636468602010-01-25T02:44:28.417-05:002010-01-25T02:44:28.417-05:00naice! the ending fits absolutely well...soooo &quot;non-cliched&quot;<br /><br />cliched being.. hero doing a karate trick, getting the torch,bashing up da angry mob :)anihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10075452472010282369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22668381.post-65854097907270262002010-01-25T02:09:37.607-05:002010-01-25T02:09:37.607-05:00*shadowVamseehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04494101399235712252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22668381.post-60735253240800690522010-01-25T02:05:29.394-05:002010-01-25T02:05:29.394-05:00good ending. open to readers imagination.<br />I suppose he kicks their butt.<br />or just rubs off the cigarette butt<br />reminds me of the hero of my upcoming script &quot;shawdow&#39;..inspired from childhood detective novels..<br /><br />if you dont comment on my posts..i wont be commenting on yours...<br /><br />scratch my back..baby.Vamseehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04494101399235712252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22668381.post-27724180573946681002010-01-25T02:01:13.321-05:002010-01-25T02:01:13.321-05:00<b>Hungry for more!</b><i>Guy Ritchie</i> feel..dark, strong, inspiring. I like the <i>Kal tha...Aaj nahi</i> style intro. It&#39;s good that you are experimenting genres and this is definitely a great start!Rahul Reddyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17023485976176359550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22668381.post-55890084301075020892010-01-25T01:49:46.281-05:002010-01-25T01:49:46.281-05:00Love it.. infact like the end.. kind of refreshing :)Niahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07088454561317706737noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22668381.post-37202067081027968402010-01-25T01:48:07.465-05:002010-01-25T01:48:07.465-05:00bloody end. hero dies. period. no after life sequels here. or wait that gives me an idea. what if the keepers of heaven play dice ?CreativeShockerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17463001785010656403noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22668381.post-23712659563035187432010-01-25T01:46:50.519-05:002010-01-25T01:46:50.519-05:00So good to read something like this. Man fears what he doesn’t understand. Nice one Sid.Ravihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07287690914463366276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22668381.post-72773544608042486382010-01-25T01:46:02.128-05:002010-01-25T01:46:02.128-05:00A wonderful composition! Absolutely crisp. But the end was abrupt. To be continued eh? :)kalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03931209630403759499noreply@blogger.com